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theVOIDnTX
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Posted 11 June 2015 - 01:45 PM

Hi, haven't been on this forum in a while. Did this in my spare time. Just thought it was a fun little project.18716228675_41261436e4_b.jpg

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Posted 11 June 2015 - 01:48 PM

Crits are welcome


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Posted 11 June 2015 - 11:03 PM

Pretty cool! I think the glass on the bottom left ist just a bit too much, but I like that the words are divided by the flare line :)

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Posted 12 June 2015 - 06:35 AM

Not really polished, the pic quality is reeeeeeally low , the astronaut suffers it the most. See the earth in the background? It's all nice and crisp and then the astronaut is a blurry grainy mess.

 

c1686df208f057430315b0dd778f9cea.png  another error is that that explosion should be blurred since the Depth of Field already started at that point. 

 

Same with the earth, should be blurred too. Remember that your astronaut is the subject here. He should be the main good quality crisp one not your background.

 

4f538b48c419bd7aee557cb00ca10a4a.png  Another error with the text here. It's really hard to read a first, not user friendly at all.  

 

 

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Fonts are also not user friendly, since you use a clean font and then pass on to a Gothic one. 

 

 

 

 

 

But not all is bad. I like the destroyed city in the helmet reflection. I know that city isn't on the moon so, it's surreal, good work on that one. 

Glass was  a good touch as well. And I like the logo, very clean and looks alright

 

Overall just keep practicing



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Posted 12 June 2015 - 12:29 PM

thanks Baka. I appreciate the help. Its nice to have a second eye look at things. I miss a lot details. 






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