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SeeJay Vs Joss (me)


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Sao
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Posted 31 December 2014 - 11:29 PM

Hello there :>

 

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Size: free

 

Rules: none

 

 

 

 

SeeJay's outcome :

 

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http://oi60.tinypic.com/4hukxz.jpg

 

 

My outcome:

 

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http://oi62.tinypic.com/9a7p1t.jpg

 

 

We both want some CnC for sure :> 

 

 

 

 

Side note: If the tags look a bit lq to you, just use the links :>


Edited by Sao, 31 December 2014 - 11:48 PM.


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Posted 01 January 2015 - 04:26 AM

I vote for sao :)

Great job to the both of you :D


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Posted 01 January 2015 - 06:27 AM

Well SeeJay gets my vote.

 

Some CnC;

SeeJay:

You could have done alot more with that composition. The c4d placement is really good and the blending is fairly nice as well (although it would look better with a bit more constrast on the render) but the lighting is really poorly done.

You could have used the green bits in the c4ds as lighting, instead of that green at the top.

 

Sao:

As for yours, it could have used alot more work, it looks really unfinished.



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Posted 01 January 2015 - 06:42 AM

 

Sao:

As for yours, it could have used alot more work, it looks really unfinished.

 

I don't see how it looks "really unfinished".



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Posted 01 January 2015 - 06:49 AM

I don't see how it looks "really unfinished".

Looks like just a background and a render on top of it. It doesn't have that layered look of background-c4d-render-c4d-fractal-lighting....



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Posted 01 January 2015 - 07:07 AM

Looks like just a background and a render on top of it. It doesn't have that layered look of background-c4d-render-c4d-fractal-lighting....

 

I could've done that thing but I'd have ended up with a total messy signature, and that's something I don't like. I even erased some splatters to make it look a bit simpler. Besides I got tired after working on 100 layers, so adding more would give me a heart attack.


Edited by Sao, 01 January 2015 - 07:17 AM.


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Posted 01 January 2015 - 07:23 AM

working on 100 layers, 

:O Jesus man
 



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Posted 01 January 2015 - 04:04 PM

Well SeeJay gets my vote.

 

Some CnC;

SeeJay:

You could have done alot more with that composition. The c4d placement is really good and the blending is fairly nice as well (although it would look better with a bit more constrast on the render) but the lighting is really poorly done.

You could have used the green bits in the c4ds as lighting, instead of that green at the top.

Thanks for the CnC Sleen!



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Posted 01 January 2015 - 07:39 PM

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i like this one. If only it weren't SO damn green. Needs more color variation



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Posted 01 January 2015 - 11:47 PM

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i like this one. If only it weren't SO damn green. Needs more color variation

Thanks for the vote and for the CnC!



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Posted 02 January 2015 - 01:09 AM

SeeJay gets my vote, although i dislike the single color palette :P the piece has a much stronger compo IMO

Sao your piece seems pretty empty and the depth is on two levels, and looks unfinished overall


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Posted 02 January 2015 - 05:27 AM

Sao your piece seems pretty empty and the depth is on two levels,


True. I thought I did something creative and different when I went with the two levels of depth style, but I failed.

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Posted 03 January 2015 - 06:35 AM

Alright gg wp Seejay, you won. 3-1. We got 4 votes out of 130 views, nice

 

 

@those who actually voted: Thank you for your votes :>


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Posted 03 January 2015 - 10:58 AM

I vote for Sao

 

Well i like/love (personal taste) green, and you both work it and take to another level, but i believe that Sao has the render in a good spot, and we can see what has been working on the background etc..

SeeJay its hard to see what you work on the back/front because i barely can see the render entiry..


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Posted 03 January 2015 - 04:56 PM

SeeJay gets my vote, although i dislike the single color palette :P the piece has a much stronger compo IMO

Thanks for the CnC and for the vote!

 

 

Alright gg wp Seejay, you won. 3-1. We got 4 votes out of 130 views, nice

 

 

@those who actually voted: Thank you for your votes :>

:th_084_:

 

 

I vote for Sao

 

Well i like/love (personal taste) green, and you both work it and take to another level, but i believe that Sao has the render in a good spot, and we can see what has been working on the background etc..

SeeJay its hard to see what you work on the back/front because i barely can see the render entiry..

Thanks for the CnC!



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Posted 05 January 2015 - 05:08 AM

Vote go for Seejay . For Cj's, the sig itself is lack of lighting. The c4d and render already place in a perfect place.


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Posted 15 January 2015 - 12:46 PM

SeeJay.


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Posted 17 January 2015 - 04:59 AM

Vote goes to seejay

The way seejay color adjusted his sig is really something i didnt like, but it helped give the illusion of blending and depth, also very good composition.

As for sao, really hated the composition and i know you were trying to keep it clean but it looks unfinish as there looks to be no depth, and blending is pretty much non existance

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