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Simplex
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Posted 13 August 2014 - 09:46 AM

Hey guys. Does this look nice and clean to you, any tips for improvement? I made it in C4D with a home-made lightbox :P

 

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Posted 13 August 2014 - 01:37 PM

It is indeed very clean, nice job. 

As for improvements, I see some kind of noise in the edges, especially in the top left one. (standing phone)

Also I heard that product photographers use polarization filters on their cameras to get rid of reflections. For example the reflection on the home button (or whatever its called) looks a little weird.

But that's me being picky again. Overall it's really good.



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Posted 13 August 2014 - 02:14 PM

looks good, only things bothering me is the Anti Aliasing on the edges and the reflection



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Posted 13 August 2014 - 02:49 PM

It is indeed very clean, nice job. 

As for improvements, I see some kind of noise in the edges, especially in the top left one. (standing phone)

Also I heard that product photographers use polarization filters on their cameras to get rid of reflections. For example the reflection on the home button (or whatever its called) looks a little weird.

But that's me being picky again. Overall it's really good.

 

Yeah I don't think you realise, this is a computer generated thing! I'm glad you find it realistic! I use Cinema 4D :D

 

looks good, only things bothering me is the Anti Aliasing on the edges and the reflection

 

I know man, I upped the anti-aliasing from 4x4 to 8x8 max and that appeared to be the best I could get out of it. 


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Posted 14 August 2014 - 12:30 AM

I really like it :D excelent job mate!


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Posted 14 August 2014 - 02:40 AM

I really like it :D excelent job mate!

Thank you! ;)


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Posted 18 August 2014 - 02:23 AM

Hey guys. Does this look nice and clean to you, any tips for improvement? I made it in C4D with a home-made lightbox :P

 

I like it. the anti aliasing does seem to be a little bother but other than that it looks great. Nice light box btw.



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Posted 20 August 2014 - 05:12 PM

Model looks good, lighting and materials could do with a bit of work. Great portfolio piece anyway. Good job.


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